The bar chart provides information about how families in a country spent weekly income in both 1968 and in 2018.

The bar chart provides information about how families in a country spent weekly income in both 1968 and in 2018.
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The bar chart displays some data related to the way that citizens of a country spent their weekly
income
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in two years.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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the money was spent on food, housing, transport, and leisure more than other options in both years, and the food was by far the highest in the first year,
while
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families tended to spend their
income
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more on entertainment in 2018.
To begin
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with, in 1968, people allocated 35 per cent of their weekly
income
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to buying food, whilst it declined dramatically to only about 17% in 2018.
On the other hand
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, the average weekly spending on housing and amusement was quite similar, at 10%, and they both inclined to nearly 19% and 22% respectively.
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, paying for transportation accounted for almost 15% in 2018,
however
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, roughly 7% of weekly
income
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was expended on it in 1968. In terms of fuel and power, clothing, and personal products, the percentages of money spent on them in 1968, were 6%, 10%, and 7%, and they all fell down to 4%, 5%, and 4%
accordingly
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. Despite all these changes, the proportion of
income
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spent on household goods remained the same in both years, at about 7%.
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