Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both points of view and give your own opinion.

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These days,
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are suffering from different diseases mainly because of obesity which increases the chances of heart attacks in humans.
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are suffering from other diseases because of increasing weight
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as Fatty Liver and High Cholesterol in the younger generation. Some
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suggest that these problems can be solved by increasing the number of
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complexes in the country with minimal or no fees as not everyone can afford costly memberships. In
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essay, I will discuss the impact on human health of
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type of change in our society. To commence with, nowadays, with increased junk food in the market caused many problems related to health.
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, food prepared by street vendors and local shops is unhygienic and unhealthy as well.
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people
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are consuming these types of foods in their daily life with no exercise in their daily routine.
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, my friend Ram, who eats street food daily in the evening after his office hours is now suffering from obesity the doctor advised him to join any
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activity of his own choice but he couldn't because of the skyrocketing membership of a
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club near his home.
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, children are overloaded with so much intense pressure these days by schools and institutions. In spite of
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, they hardly play any
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because of the lack of availability of good
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facilities nearby. To explicate, these days, there are not many playgrounds left to play some outdoor games
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as Cricket, Hockey or Tennis for children because
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young generation is not very physically active or fit.
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, my niece spends most of his time playing video games after coming home from school as there are no attractive
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facilities around
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as Swimming, Gyms or Basketball grounds
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which he is suffering from some minor health problems.
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, In my opinion, increasing
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clubs will keep them motivated towards their fitness goals and develop interests in some kind of outdoor sport which they have never experienced and it will help them increase their fitness levels.
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Ensure that the essay directly addresses all aspects of the task. Include a balanced discussion of both points of view and provide a clear opinion at the end of the essay.
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The introduction is present and provides an overview of the points to be discussed. Ensure that each paragraph is logically linked and that cohesive devices are used effectively to connect ideas throughout the essay.
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