IELTS Writing Correction Service
Writing Samples
Band 8.5

You lost your driving licence and someone found it and sent it back to you. Write a letter to the finder. In your letter -describe why the licence is important to you -ask where he or she found it -offer how would vou like to thank him/her

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Dear Mr John, I can't express enough to you my gratitude for the effort made in returning my misplaced Driver's license that was found by you. I am sincerely dumbfounded by your selflessness despite being far away from my address. You wouldn't believe it if I told you that I just got the license three days ago in order to use it for my international application to Australia as a national identity document, and more importantly, I am meant to submit it online before the weekend. So, If not for your warm act, I wouldn't be able to meet up with the task. If may ask, where did you find it exactly? Was it at the pedestrian waiting area or on the bus sit because, the
last
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 thing I remembered was that I left it in my pocket
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 waiting at the bus station.
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, I know you are just being kind,
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, I would appreciate it if you would let me know how I can express my gratitude to you.
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, I would like to refund your transport fare, so, kindly send me your bank account number for transfer. I look forward to hearing from you. Warm regards, Moses.

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coherence cohesion
Consider breaking down complex sentences to enhance clarity.
coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph focuses on a single idea for better organization.
coherence cohesion
Your greeting and closing are well-executed and appropriate.
task achievement
Your tone is very polite and suitable for the context.
task achievement
You have addressed all parts of the task effectively.
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