Write a letter to your neighbour requesting that something be done about your dog. Include in your letter: Your reason for writing What would you like to happen

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Dear Sir, I hope

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letter finds you in good health and high spirits !

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is to bring your kind attention to an unexpected situation that compelled me to write

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letter. I am facing issues with the

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continuous

barks that your

dog

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is making , especially at

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. I am a fourth-year student currently pursuing my Bachelor's Degree from Gitam University and I complete most of my assignments at

night

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I am preparing for the UPSC exam at

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, and you

clealy

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clearly

know the effort I have to make in order to clear the exam. Since I am a

night

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owl , I prefer studying at

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. I would request you kindly look into

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matter and help to resolve the issue at the earliest.

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, I have experience with pets and I believe that your

dog

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needs some attention. I would suggest that you take your

dog

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for a regular checkup to a

veteniary

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veterinary

doctor. I will take your

dog

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for a

check up

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if you are busy with your daily schedule. I would be more than happy to help you. I have entrusted

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matter to your kind attention, I believe you do the needful. Thank you once again. Yours Sincerely, Shreyashi

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

207 words

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