Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everything matters is likely to result in a society of individual who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

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few individuals tend to admire that independent decision-making must be provided to youngsters in the areas of their interest

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others think that a society of own wishes for pupils will be developed by providing more freedom to youth.

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essay agrees that egoistic problems and disrespect for ancestors will arise if independent decisions are made by children. Selfish behaviour is one of the most common problems that occurs when people only think of themselves which often leads to disrespect for their family members in the houses.People tend to believe themselves right every time which creates a generational gap in the households.A recent study in 2019 in Sweden found that 70% of old-age people reside in old-age care homes

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their children's self-concerned behaviour.

However

,many disagree and feel that youth are the future of the

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upcoming world which is only possible when no longer decisions of

parents

are included in their essential matters.Youngsters are more socialised in today's era

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they are the more updated version of society

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still follow an ancient version for

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of children.Despite

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,communication could be used as an asset to reduce interference of

parents

in their own interests.

For instance

,my family always follow get-together on a weekly basis to understand more of their child's point of view to avoid disagreement.

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essay disagrees that individuals must make decisions by themselves.

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will curb self-centred behaviour and bring

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nature towards

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by doing proper communication, some still feel youngsters are the future generation of the economy and are free to make each decision in their life.