As technology improves, there will be fewer jobs for people in the future. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.
With the advancement of technology in recent decades, it is believed that the improvements in many working
sectors
especially the industrial sector
will impose adverse impacts on the employment of people in the near future. I completely agree with this
statement.
First of all, Gone are those days when the most of work tasks required more and more manpower. Nowadays, with technical advancement, all business sectors
have been fully changed and become highly dependent on automatic machinery. For example
, in the car-manufacturing industry, the recent CIBC report witnessed that 80% of the car-making process these days is being operated with the help of highly equipped and advanced kinds of equipment and only 20% of the total process needs human involvement to increase the car production annually and to meet the transportation demand. Thus
, that day will not be far when the whole industry will become fully automatically operated.
Moreover
, even though some people may argue that there will be some sectors
such
as the creative and art sectors
which can not be replaced by new gadgets, I believe that even these sectors
are being impacted by this
digital era. For instance
, many artists these days not only design their work on a large touch screen computer but also
publish their work mostly on the internet. In addition
, the AI sector
is also
becoming sufficient to produce the same quality of human artwork through smart computers. Therefore
, creative workers
along with
industrial workers
will not be hired by most employers in the coming years.
To conclude
, I strongly reckon that the improvement of the tech sector
will impact the employment sector
and result in fewer vacancies for all workers
in the future whether these workers
are from the industrial sector
or the creative sector
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