Plastic bag, plastic bottle, and plastic packing are bad for the environment. What damage does plastic do the environment? What government to sole this problem can do?.
Nowadays, people live a busy life.
As a result
, in this
condition, The
society has increased Correct article usage
apply
use
of Correct article usage
the use
plastic
product
. Fix the agreement mistake
products
Thus
, use
of plastic
goods people are living with
Change preposition
in
contaminated
environment. First of all, Correct article usage
a contaminated
i
would like to say, Change the capitalization
I
Dengue
patients have increased in the world today .Correct word choice
that Dengue
This
is main
reason, Add an article
the main
folk
lived Rephrase
why folk
with
contaminated Change preposition
in
environment
. The Fix the agreement mistake
environments
Government
is able to use
their
Correct pronoun usage
its
power
for
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to
sold
Verb problem
solve
this
problem. In my point of view, I am going to explain further
paragraphs with relevant examples.
On the one hand, past era the
society Correct article usage
apply
use
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used
of
Change preposition
apply
nature
Replace the word
natural
product
and that Fix the agreement mistake
products
product
no
harmful to the Verb problem
was not
environments
. BecauseFix the agreement mistake
environment
,
at that time Remove the comma
apply
everyone
life Change noun form
everyone's
is
not busy they had Wrong verb form
was
expend
more time Change the verb form
expended
with
basic human needs in spite of currently living busy life Change preposition
on
therefore
, they use
more Wrong verb form
used
plastic
product
Fix the agreement mistake
products
as a result
everywhere throw the
Correct article usage
apply
plastic
bag,bottle
,..etc by humans in spite of Collect water inside the goods grow up Fix the agreement mistake
bottles
dengue
mosquitos Because,
unfortunately until now don’t have the system for p recycling Remove the comma
apply
plastic
. This
is the reason in in
the world was increased Change preposition
for
dengue
populations
. Fix the agreement mistake
population
For Instance
: 10 years ago they
were very few Correct pronoun usage
there
dengue
patients in srilanka
.I would like to say, Correct your spelling
Sri Lanka
that is
a ones
in a blue moon Change the noun form
one
however
, now spread
like wildfire. Nowadays, Wrong verb form
spreads
srilanka
many of them accept Change the capitalization
Srilanka
to
the Change preposition
apply
use
plastics
Change preposition
of plastics
product
. Nevertheless
, they are unable to do recycling. Therefore
, growing up dengue
problems
in srilanka
.
Correct your spelling
Sri Lanka
On the other hand
, in the world all countries
leader is Change noun form
country's
countries'
Government
. By the Correct article usage
the Government
way
they can Add a comma
,way
use
their power
for
the settle Change preposition
apply
this
Change the determiner
this problem
these problems
problems
. For instance
, At this
time Srilanka
the government
very nicely controlled this
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this problem
these problems
problems
. They are bring
new rules and only recycling items were allowed to be sold. Because of that above I mention Change the verb form
are bringing
government
used their power
are able to sold
Verb problem
solve
this
problem.
To
conclusion, plastics Change preposition
In
doing
many of damage to the environment. and The Wrong verb form
do
government
use
their power
can controlled
Change the verb form
control
this
Change the determiner
this problem
these problems
problems
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