Plastic bag, plastic bottle, and plastic packing are bad for the environment.2152 What damage does plastic do the environment? What government to sole this problem can do?.
Nowadays, people live a busy life.
As a result
, in
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of
this
condition, society has increased use
of elastic stock. Correct article usage
the use
Thus
, use
of plastic
goods people are living in a contaminated environment. First of all, I would like to say, Dengue
patients have increased in the world today .Correct word choice
that Dengue
This
is the main reason, folk lived in contaminated environments. The Government is able to use
of
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apply
their
power to solve Correct pronoun usage
its
this
problem. In my point of view, I am going to explain further
paragraphs with relevant examples.
On the one hand, past era society use
natural Wrong verb form
used
product
and that Fix the agreement mistake
products
product
was no harmful to the environment. Because,
at that time everyone’s life was not busy they had expended more time on basic human needs in spite of currently living busy life Remove the comma
apply
therefore
, they use
more Wrong verb form
used
plastic
product
Fix the agreement mistake
products
as a result
everywhere throw plastic
bag
,bottles,..etc by humans in spite of Collect water inside the goods grow up Fix the agreement mistake
bags
dengue
mosquitos Because,
unfortunately until now don’t have the system for p recycling Remove the comma
apply
plastic
. This
is the reason for the world was increased dengue
population. For Instance
: 10 years ago there were very few dengue
patients in srilanka
.I would like to say, Correct your spelling
Sri Lanka
that is
a one in a blue moon however
, now spreads like wildfire. Nowadays, srilanka
many of them accept Change the capitalization
Srilanka
to
the Change preposition
apply
use
of plastics product
. Nevertheless
, they are unable to do recycling. Therefore
, growing up dengue
problems in srilanka
.
Correct your spelling
Sri Lanka
On the other hand
, in the world all countries’ leader is authority. By the ,
way they can Remove the comma
apply
use
their capability for
settle Change preposition
to
this
troubles. Correct determiner usage
these
For instance
, At this
time Srilanka
the government very nicely controlled this problems
. They are bringing new rules and only recycling items are Change the determiner
this problem
these problems
allowing
to be Wrong verb form
allowed
selling
. Because of that Wrong verb form
sold
above
I mention state used their rules and Rephrase
apply
regulation
are able to solve Fix the agreement mistake
regulations
this
problem.
In conclusion, plastics do many of damage to the environment. and The government use
their power can control this problems
.Change the determiner
this problem
these problems
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