Plastic bag, plastic bottle, and plastic packing are bad for the environment.2152 What damage does plastic do the environment? What government to sole this problem can do?.

Nowadays, people live a busy life.
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of elastic stock.
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of
plastic
goods people are living in a contaminated environment. First of all, I would like to say,
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patients have increased in the world today .
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power to solve
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natural
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and that
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at that time everyone’s life was not busy they had expended more time on basic human needs in spite of currently living busy life
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more
plastic
product
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products
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as a result
everywhere throw
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,bottles,..etc by humans in spite of Collect water inside the goods grow up
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unfortunately until now don’t have the system for p recycling
plastic
.
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is the reason for the world was increased
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population.
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Sri Lanka
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many of them accept
to
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the
use
of plastics
product
.
Nevertheless
, they are unable to do recycling.
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, growing up
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problems in
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Sri Lanka
.
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way they can
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troubles.
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time
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the government very nicely controlled
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. They are bringing new rules and only recycling items are
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to be
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. Because of that
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I mention state used their rules and
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are able to solve
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problem. In conclusion, plastics do many of damage to the environment. and The government
use
their power can control
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