You have had a bank account for a few years. Recently you received a letter from the hank stating that your account is $240 overdrawn and that you will he charged $70 which will be taken directly from your account. You know that this information is incorrect.  Write a letter to the bank. Explain what has happened and say what you would like them to do about it.

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Dear Sir/Madam, I have been a loyal banking customer at your

bank

. I am writing

this

letter

to bring

into

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your notice

about

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letter

that I

had

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received from your

bank

informing me

about

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$240

overdrawn

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and being imposed $70 charges. I had been staying in a rented apartment and the

bank

was clearly given standing instructions. Recently my house was changed to a new locality and the same was notified to the

bank

authorities. I was issued a written acknowledgement

letter

bearing reference # 293761 with the same. I believe that the rental charges have been debited again reflecting an overdraw of 240 dollars.

Therefore

, I request you to re-check the error

occurred

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and cancel the charges.

In addition

to that, I would want you to send a formal

letter

about

this

incident to my old owner so that he can deposit the amount into my

bank

. Thanking you. Yours sincerely, Janie Roy.

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7 paragraphs

155 words

7.00

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Single idea per paragraph

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Accurate linking words

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Lexical resource: 5.0

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Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

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