You have had a bank account for a few years. Recently you received a letter from the hank stating that your account is $240 overdrawn and that
you will he charged $70 which will be taken directly from your account. You know that this information is incorrect.

Write a letter to the bank. Explain what has happened and say what you would like them to do about it.

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Dear Sir/Madam, I have been a loyal banking customer at your
bank
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. I am writing
this
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letter
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to bring
into
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your notice
about
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a
letter
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that I
had
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received from your
bank
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informing me
about
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that
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$240
overdrawn
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was overdrawn
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and being imposed $70 charges. I had been staying in a rented apartment and the
bank
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was clearly given standing instructions. Recently my house was changed to a new locality and the same was notified to the
bank
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authorities. I was issued a written acknowledgement
letter
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bearing reference # 293761 with the same. I believe that the rental charges have been debited again reflecting an overdraw of 240 dollars.
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, I request you to re-check the error
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and cancel the charges.
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to that, I would want you to send a formal
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about
this
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incident to my old owner so that he can deposit the amount into my
bank
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. Thanking you. Yours sincerely, Janie Roy.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • discrepancy
  • overdrawn
  • levied
  • transactions
  • inconvenience
  • rectified
  • thoroughly
  • prompt
  • re-evaluation
  • swift resolution
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