The graph below gives information about international tourist arrivals in different parts of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information about international tourist arrivals in different parts of the world. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
The graph shows the
number
Use synonyms
of overseas
visitors
Use synonyms
, travelling to five areas of the globe, between 1990 and 2005.
Overall
Linking Words
, the
number
Use synonyms
of
visitors
Use synonyms
to all regions increased significantly, but the
number
Use synonyms
of
visitors
Use synonyms
to North
America
Use synonyms
was always the largest. Between the years 1990 and 2005, the
number
Use synonyms
of holidaymakers who chose Central and Eastern Europe Rose significantly from 30
million
Use synonyms
to around 80
million
Use synonyms
people. with the most significant spike between the years 1990 and 1995. Meanwhile, the figure of tourists who chose to visit Sub-Saharan Africa and South
America
Use synonyms
was the slowest to grow, yet the
number
Use synonyms
of tourists almost doubled from around 10
million
Use synonyms
visitors
Use synonyms
to an estimated 20
million
Use synonyms
in the year 2005 with Sun-Saharan Africa having slightly more
visitors
Use synonyms
than South
America
Use synonyms
. North
America
Use synonyms
remained the most visited place during the whole 15-year period, compared to the 2nd most popular visited region of Central and Eastern Europe which only had around 30
million
Use synonyms
visitors
Use synonyms
compared to 70
million
Use synonyms
visitors
Use synonyms
who chose North
America
Use synonyms
as their travel destination in the year 1990. The
number
Use synonyms
of travellers to North
America
Use synonyms
suffered slightly
declined
Verb problem
apply
show examples
after it peaked in the year 2000 with around 19
million
Use synonyms
while
Linking Words
the other destination still retained their growth.
Submitted by kitvaratadadej on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, visitors, america, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
What to do next:
Look at other essays: