The graph compares the sales of different music formats from 1994 to 2006. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the
sales
volume of 3 different music
formats in the US from 1994 to 2006. Overall
, it is clearly
that Change the word
clear
music
sales
of CDs
and Cassettes
reduced while
that of digital music
increased. In addition
, digital music
became the most popular music
format in 2006.
In 1994, CDs
sales
numbers started at roughly 450 million
before peaked
at 800 Wrong verb form
peaking
million
in 2000. In contrast
, in the same period, the figures of
Change preposition
for
Cassettes
also
started at 400 million
then
hit a trough at nearly 100 Correct word choice
and then
million
. The numbers
of digital Fix the agreement mistake
number
music
remained constant at around 5 million
.
From 2000 to 2006, CDs
Fix the agreement mistake
CD
sales
volume experienced a slump from its peak to only 300 million
. Similarly
, there was a gradual decline from 100 million
to nearly 5 million
of
Change preposition
in
Cassettes
Change the noun form
cassette
sales
volume. However
, the figures of
digital Change preposition
for
music
showed a slight climb from around 5 million
to 10 million
before overtook that of cassettes
in 2002 and that of CDs
in 2004. By 2006, digital music
had reached a peak of 750 million
units sold, which made it become the most preferred music
format.Submitted by trungkien.ktdn.nt on
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