Many feel that going to the gym is the best way to stay fit. Others think there are more effective methods. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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majority of people

choosing

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gym

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the gym

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as well

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as the finest option to achieve a fit body and keep

body

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their body

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in shape. Others assume that it is time-consuming and ineffective and there are more beneficial solutions to get that purpose.

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writer partly

believe

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that combining copious ways is likely more effective in improving flexibility and fitness. On the one hand, gymnasts usually rent a term and they have to pay monthly for using those essential tools for

workout

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workouts

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. There is no doubt that it is a disadvantage for the youth who are in financial problems but have

ambition

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to improve their fitness.

Furthermore

, the prices depend on the location of the gym and the benefits it brings back to the renters.

According to

various surveys, it is proved that gymnasts have to try their best with

couple

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of tools

in

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a very long period of time to train their muscles bigger and bigger.

However

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with essential training conditions and crucial sets of isolation, they can easily get what they paid for.

Thus

, they have to pay huge

amount

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of funding to

this

process but as soon as possible the gymnast will become a healthier person and possess a fantastic

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abs.

On the other hand

, it is vital to understand that

instead

of paying cash to rely on tools in the gyms, we can make use of cheaper and even free opportunities to do exercises. Take a particular sample in the public parks in cities, there are

variety

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of bikes that the local residents are allowed to use during their training.

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,

the

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outdoor activities

such

as cycling or running are great methods

owing

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to train your body in a convenient environment. Obviously, athletes are more likely to work in a very good mood to easily

concentrating

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on the process. In conclusion, I think it is more effective to do exercise outside

due to

its better conditions.

Thus

people require an essential environment to focus on their training process.