Many feel that going to the gym is the best way to stay fit. Others think there are more effective methods. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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some argue that

gym

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is the best place to improve health and keep fit, I believe that it has many measures to lose weight and

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healthier. On the one hand, enrolling

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the

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gym

course is

suitable

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way to make your body healthy.

First,

many

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modern equipment is equipped for

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demand. It is used to

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for

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gymer

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who want to eliminate fat and

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muscle masses. Not only that

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but

also

they are instructed by personal training. They will support you with a curriculum for a newbie.

Furthermore

, you may avoid injuries which

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caused by other causes.

Thus

, attending the

gym

is

also

good for leading a healthy lifestyle.

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,

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people who pursue

standard

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a standard

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lifestyle, usually go to the

gym

to renew

yourself

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.

On the other hand

, others can’t afford

for joining

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the

gym

so training at home or playing

sport

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also

is

good

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a good

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solution for preserving health and fitness. Nowadays,

sports

are very prevalent throughout the world. Approximately 80% of

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populations

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in the world

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in

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sports

. Activating

sports

can help people to sustain a fit and healthy state. Playing

sports

will increase your energy

together with

your staff.

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way, a lot of

trainer

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guess that you can

training

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at home with several basic tutorial videos. It is available for some who can’t spend any time

for

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going to the

gym

.

Furthermore

, you aren’t

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about the

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time because

this

is your habitat and you are able to practice anytime you like.

Thus

, coming to the

gym

isn’t necessary for someone who is poor. Taking everything in a nutshell, critics argue that enrolling in a

gym

is the top method to keep your figure fit.

Additionally

, it must be self-evident that there are other techniques that are

also

effective.