Some people think that cultural traditions may be destroyed when they are used as money-making traditions aimed at tourists, others, however, believe that it is the only way to save these traditions. Discuss both views and give your opinion
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a big
people
about cultural traditions. Some people
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to
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money
from it, it can cause lots of damages
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damage
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to
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live
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in another
country
. In this
essay, i
will explain both sides and give some opinions Change the capitalization
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why
it would be beneficial.
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on why
people
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sometimes
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us
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,
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the
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may
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the culture's
then
destroy it or at least visiting people
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a tendency
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teach
it
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if it
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is
country
's traditional things. Consequently
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the goverment
goverment
will struggle to maintain its traditional Correct your spelling
government
governments
value
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values
while
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them
Secondly
, now we are living changing world
so eberyone
wants to make Correct your spelling
everyone
money
and display their culture for all of the world
and it is able to bring money
and keep cultural value long time. To better understand let me take example
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an example
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the world
people
prefer traveling
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travelling
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live
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learn
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learning
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the tradition
tradition
, and so on if they were once here enjoy being here next time they would bring friends and even Fix the agreement mistake
traditions
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the neighborhood
neighborhood
too, it means more Change the spelling
neighbourhood
money
. As a result
, Add an article
the county
county
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country
is become
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has become
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and more popular, Correct your spelling
more
society
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and society
start
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In conclusion
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people
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the country
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