In some countries the average weight of people is increasing, and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems? What measures could be taken to solve them?
In recent years, whilst developed countries have seen an influx in
number
of citizens compared to their healthiness, I am of Change the article
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the number
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the belief
belief
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believe
this
dilemma due
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is due
the
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apply
people
unhealthy Change noun form
people's
lifestyle
and physical laziness. Fix the agreement mistake
lifestyles
However
, nations should practice good habits and governments should invest more in expanding recreational facilities in order to deal with this
issue.
To embark on, one of the primary problems caused by the decline of
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in
people
fitness is Change noun form
people's
that
following Correct word choice
apply
unhealthy
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an unhealthy
life style
. Correct your spelling
lifestyle
This
means that if generations keep working without taking care to
what they eat and what they do, Change preposition
of
this
can be causing depression and diseases. A prominent example is United
Arab Emirates where many citizens depend Correct article usage
the United
in
fast food rather than cooking at home Change preposition
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due to
their responsibilities which can be causing
many diseases Wrong verb form
cause
such
as obesity and diabetes. This
example shows that overweigh not only aggravate
health issues, but Correct subject-verb agreement
aggravates
it
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apply
also
has a detrimental effect on the population increase.
Nevertheless
, one of the viable solutions to mitigate this
issue is to boost people of knowledge’s
to exercise and provide entertainment facilities. Change noun form
knowledge
In other words
, when the authorities offer sport
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sports
equipment’s
in the open air as gardens and sea, they entice adults and Change noun form
equipment
elderly
to Correct article usage
the elderly
paly
sports and reduce depression. A prominent example is the Gulf Countries which afford Correct your spelling
play
treadmill
in in the majority of gardens for their natives. Eventually, what can be said is that these are some of the ways Fix the agreement mistake
treadmills
which
can be introduced to make individuals pay attention Correct pronoun usage
that
about
their healthy lifestyle.
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after
this
essay has manifested the points mentioned above, it can be reiterated that the drawbacks of increasing wight
may have a deleterious effect on the well-being of the population Correct your spelling
weight
due to
the dedication in
working and psychological suffering. Change preposition
to
Therefore
, I believe that the authorities should endeavor
to endorse all natives to tackle Change the spelling
endeavour
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