The chart below provides information about weekly hours worked by Australian men and women in 2012.
The given bar graph illustrates the
proportion
of both sexes in Australia who worked weekly hours
basis in 2012.
Overall
, the highest proportion
was males who worked 20 or above working hours
per week, conversely
the highest percentage of females can be seen in the below 20 weekly hours
categories
.
Regarding 20 or above hours
per week sections, one-quarter of men
have worked 20-29 hours
, whereas
approximately half of women
have worked in the same group
. When it comes to the 30-39 hours
group
, one-fifth of gens have worked, while
12% of females worked. Moreover
, 17% of men
can be seen in the 40+ hours
working group
, nevertheless
around half of women
worked 40+ hours
.
Turning to the below 20-hours
categories
, the proportion
of women
is higher than the proportion
of men
in all categories
. While
4 % of gens worked 0-10 hours
, 6% of ladies have worked that amount of time. Furthermore
, as is seen in the 11-14 hours
per week group
, 6% of men
and 8% of women
worked. However
, approximately the same proportion
of both sexes can be seen in the below 20-hours
categories
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