These days more and more
people
moving to big
cities
from rural
areaFix the agreement mistake
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for better employment and
goodCorrect article usage
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lifestyle
however
this
situation creates numerous
problems
such
as pollution and overcrowding. But the
can take
fewCorrect article usage
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steps to curb
this Change the determiner
this problem
these problems
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problems
and encourage
people
not to leave small towns.
This
essay will
further
elaborate
bothChange preposition
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problems
and solutions.
To commence with, Migration to metropolitan
cities
creates a plethora of
problems
.
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and foremost is overcrowding. As
is increasing rapidly
people
are moving to large
cities
for better job
opportunityFix the agreement mistake
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and infrastructure.
Hence
cities
are facing
problemAdd an article
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of overcrowding.
Due to
this
metro
cities
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lack
of Change preposition
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adequate living space.
For example
, Mumbai
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not
enoughAdd a missing verb
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living space for
people
therefore
people
live in slum
areaFix the agreement mistake
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.
Secondly
, with the increase of public in big
cities
,
costCorrect article usage
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of living and
automobileFix the agreement mistake
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has risen.
people
ownsChange the verb form
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their own vehicle to commute.
Therefore
air pollution has increased
. Another negative effect of migration is ,
peopleCorrect word choice
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are cutting
forsetCorrect your spelling
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to make more houses and commercial buildings and making it
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concreateCorrect your spelling
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jungle.
Hence
, It affects
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.
To curb
this Change the determiner
this problem
these problems
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problems
, The government should encourage
people
not to move from small
townFix the agreement mistake
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by providing better facilities in rural areas
such
as fresh water, superb infrastructure and better employment
optionFix the agreement mistake
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.
peopleCapitalize word
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are moving because metro
cities
has facilities that small town
dosentVerb problem
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have
therefore
government should invest more to develop rural
areCorrect your spelling
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and make more amends to give better education and spend more money on developing small towns.By doing
this
it
also
solveChange the verb form
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the
problems
too.
To summarise, by agglomerating all the points aforementioned above,
majorityCorrect article usage
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of
people
settling in big
cities
cause many
problems
to
cities
and
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however
the
solveCorrect subject-verb agreement
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it by providing better
and spending more money to develop urban areas.