A large company in your area has decided to spend a certain amount of money, either to sponsor a local children's sports team for two years, or to pay for two open-air concerts. It has asked for feedback from the general public. write a letter to the company. In your letter *describe the benefits of sponsoring the sports team * summaries the benefits of paying for the concerts * say how you think the company should spend the money
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Dear Sir/ Madam, I am writing
you
today regarding the feedback your company asked for in the Ville Marie Change preposition
to you
area
. There are two choices for us to choose from and I am going to pen down my opinion in this
letter. Firstly
, there are a number of benefits to sponsoring a sports
team
for young people of
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in
area
. I have grown up in the community and I have seen the talents of these young minds, and how capable they are in football. In fact, they have their team
called Champions which they really are. These people need to be motivated to play at the state championship level but financially all of them are not equal and thus
it would be the
best to sponsor these Correct article usage
apply
children's
and motivate them to take part in Change noun form
children
sports
.
There are as well
multiple benefits Rephrase
apply
for
sponsoring a concert in the space, as it will bring Change preposition
to
tourist
from nearby Fix the agreement mistake
tourists
area
and the city of Montreal will get recognized Fix the agreement mistake
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to
its mark. It will help grow the city to Change preposition
for
remarkable
extent. Add an article
a remarkable
This
will bring our area
to life.
Comparing the perk
of both, I think the company should support young generation Fix the agreement mistake
perks
sports
team
as it will not only profit Fix the agreement mistake
teams
city
but to every individual who is capable enough and motivate them to reach the higher state in their career. Correct article usage
the city
Although
the concert is the purpose of entertainment on the contrary
it would likely create the
less impact on Correct article usage
apply
lives
of Correct article usage
the lives
community
as it will be supporting Add an article
the community
sports
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the sports
team
financially. Thus
, I am in favor
of Change the spelling
favour
growth
of the young people Add an article
the growth
of
our Change preposition
in
area
.
Sincerely, Radha DesaiSubmitted by desairadha28 on
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Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.