The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010.

The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010.
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The given two maps depict routes to access a
city
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hospital in 2007 and 2010.
Overall
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, there were not only several modifications to the roads and the
car
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park
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areas but
also
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a newly-added
bus
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station as well. In 2007, the
city
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hospital was wrapped around by Ring
Road
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and to the south of
this
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hospital, lying
City
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Road
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parallel to the hospital. It can
also
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be observed that Ring
Rd
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and
City
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Rd
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were connected by Hospital
Rd
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where three
bus
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stops were equidistant along each side of
this
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road
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.
Moreover
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, a
car
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park
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for mutual engagement was located to the right of Hospital
Road
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. After several adjustments over the course of 3 years, in 2010, it can be seen that the
bus
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stops were demolished to build a
bus
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station positioned right on the West side of Hospital
Road
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. Two roundabouts were constructed, one connected Hospital
Rd
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to Ring
Rd
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and the other connected Hospital
Rd
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to
City
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Rd
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.
In addition
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, the
car
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park
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remained in its original position but it could only be accessed by the hospital's staff,
whereas
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a new
car
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park
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for public use was built on the right-hand side of the hospital.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Vocabulary: Replace the words city, car, park, bus, road, rd with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • dual carriageway
  • roundabout
  • traffic flow
  • multi-story car park
  • green spaces
  • pedestrian provisions
  • footpaths
  • traffic signals
  • construction phase
  • ambulances
  • carriageway expansion
  • traffic congestion
  • pedestrian crossings
  • urban planning
  • infrastructure development
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