The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010.

The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010.
The given two maps depict routes to access a
city
hospital in 2007 and 2010.
Overall
, there were not only several modifications to the roads and the
car
park
areas but
also
a newly-added
bus
station as well. In 2007, the
city
hospital was wrapped around by Ring
Road
and to the south of
this
hospital, lying
City
Road
parallel to the hospital. It can
also
be observed that Ring
Rd
and
City
Rd
were connected by Hospital
Rd
where three
bus
stops were equidistant along each side of
this
road
.
Moreover
, a
car
park
for mutual engagement was located to the right of Hospital
Road
. After several adjustments over the course of 3 years, in 2010, it can be seen that the
bus
stops were demolished to build a
bus
station positioned right on the West side of Hospital
Road
. Two roundabouts were constructed, one connected Hospital
Rd
to Ring
Rd
and the other connected Hospital
Rd
to
City
Rd
.
In addition
, the
car
park
remained in its original position but it could only be accessed by the hospital's staff,
whereas
a new
car
park
for public use was built on the right-hand side of the hospital.
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  • accessibility
  • dual carriageway
  • roundabout
  • traffic flow
  • multi-story car park
  • green spaces
  • pedestrian provisions
  • footpaths
  • traffic signals
  • construction phase
  • ambulances
  • carriageway expansion
  • traffic congestion
  • pedestrian crossings
  • urban planning
  • infrastructure development
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