In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?
In
this
modern era, Linking Words
all
parts of the world individuals from Change preposition
in all
countryside
are shifting to metropolitan cities for many reasons which leads to adverse Add an article
the countryside
effect
in rural regions. In Fix the agreement mistake
effects
this
essay, I consider Linking Words
this
as a negative point, Linking Words
whereas
Linking Words
as
some factors related to Correct word choice
apply
this
trend will be addressed in forthcoming paragraphs.
On the one hand, the developing cities are not having Linking Words
positive
impact Correct article usage
a positive
due to
the local area Linking Words
people
switching their preference of living in urban areas. Use synonyms
Firstly
, the pollution will be boosted as maximum usage of private vehicles. Another reason, Linking Words
Add a missing verb
is over
over
Change preposition
that
population
will cause the city employment difficulty which results Add the comma(s)
,population
to
division in opportunities Change preposition
in
and
Correct word choice
apply
lastly
, the public will Linking Words
be having
living problems as the rate of renting or buying Wrong verb form
have
the
house would Correct article usage
a
be surged
. Change to the active voice
surge
have surged
For example
, Mumbai Linking Words
which
is called as ‘City Of Dreams’ because it is said that there is a chance of living passion and Correct pronoun usage
apply
highest
number of opportunities in every field which Correct article usage
the highest
resulted
manyAdd the preposition
inresulted
fromresulted
to
Change preposition
apply
people
from Use synonyms
outskirts
Correct article usage
the outskirts
who shifted
there is Wrong verb form
shifting
having
successful and wealthy lifestyle.
Wrong verb form
have
On the other hand
, the rural places will be in major loss Linking Words
such
as agriculture Linking Words
many
other factors. Correct word choice
and many
Furthermore
, agriculture plays a vital role to every resident globally. Linking Words
However
, Linking Words
due to
the scarcity of manpower Linking Words
the
development and Correct article usage
apply
Linking Words
additionally
farming will be diminished in Rephrase
apply
countryside
. Add an article
the countryside
In contrast
, many young Linking Words
people
who Use synonyms
shifts
to Change the verb form
shift
city
Add an article
the city
for seeking
opportunities will Change preposition
to seek
loose
their social, Correct your spelling
lose
traditional
customsCorrect word choice
and traditional
respectively
. Rephrase
apply
For example
, nowadays, many cities Linking Words
are having
the traditional farming method in Wrong verb form
have
this
technological area Linking Words
due to
the scarcity of Linking Words
people
.
In conclusion, the Use synonyms
people
who Use synonyms
is
changing their preference in living in urban places Change the verb form
are
due to
the facilities and amenities Linking Words
which
Correct pronoun usage
that
captivates
them in shifting and the traffic congestion will Correct subject-verb agreement
captivate
rose
in urban areas and Wrong verb form
rise
economy
impact in Replace the word
economic
outskirts
. Eventually, to stop Correct article usage
the outskirts
this
the countryside should be developed.Linking Words
Submitted by pooja22nov on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.