Some people think it is necessary to test medicine intended for humans, on animals first. However, others feel that this should not be the way. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

Today there are so many debates around
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animal testing. Some
people
consider that new medicines and
vactions
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vaccines
should go over the test on
animals
before the
people
usage,
while
other
group
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of individuals think that
this
practice is cruel in
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of nature. In
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I will argue, that animal testing is not an optimal way to solve
this
problem. On the one hand, checking the side effects of new medicines is essential.
In other words
, the medicine that theoretically treats a particular issue
,
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can cause new illnesses and harm
person`s
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a person`s
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health.
For instance
, if there are allergen
component
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in the medicament, treatment could lead to serious problems with health down to death. In
this
case,
animals
are the most suitable organisms, because they have partly similar organs and physical processes, compared
by
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human
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body.
On the other hand
, animal testing is an amoral practice that
provide
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harmful
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a harmful
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effect on our environment.
To begin
with, animal testing is not appropriate to the moral norms and
too
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cruel, even
animals
often die in testing labs.
In addition
,
animals
are the base of the fauna and food chain and their destruction will lead to
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environmental issues,
such
as climate change and honouring of some species.
To sum up
, even
there
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are
people
who believe in the effectiveness of animal testing in development of the medicine, I will argue, that
people
do not have
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the rights
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rights
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right
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to decide the fat of the
animals
.
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