Many feel that going to the gym is the best way to stay fit. Others think that there are more effective methods. Discuss both view and give your own opinion.

The majority of citizens believed there was no other way to remain weight.

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, the counterparts supposed that there are still là một better strategies.

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writer is of the latter statement and will explain why throughout the essay. First and foremost, the main cause can be mentioned that why practice in the

gym

is much greater than many different processes. A

gym

is a place in which everyone can try their best to achieve goals about keeping fit,

thus

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further

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they may even acquaint some new friends there. Recently, the

gym

have

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become familiar with modern residents mainly because of

their

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facilities,

it

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helps gymnasts profoundly, and they

also

gain

motivations

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from other people in that

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.

Therefore

, it steadily forms a habit from

advantages

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of

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.

Nevetheless

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, differs from the above paragraph, a lot of inhabitants still recommend the hobby that

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of preparing a healthy diet and

likewise

go

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jogging usually. In many countries, especially in Vietnam, in the early period of the day, numerous groups of elderly flock to parks just to exercise and improve their health,

they

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have used

this

manner to stay fit for a long time in life of themself. So,

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bias is another aspect

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weight.

Although

going to the

gym

seems like

a good advice

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but other plans look more suitable as its benefits, it will form a nice habit when

trainners

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trainers

develop fibres in their meals and gradually adapts to it. In conclusion, the second statement is really appropriate for a large

amount

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of humans, they do not have to spend any kind of money but they can still keep fit.