Many feel that going to the gym is the best way to stay fit. Others think there are more effective methods. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

It is thought by individuals that the best way to stay fit is by hitting the

gym

because it helps us to become healthier and to get in shape

while

others think that there are better ways to do it

due to

the time reduction and it is low difficulty. I have been considering and agree with the former option because it is easy to have more

friends

at the

gym

club. First of all,

although

, there are various choices to get fit

such

as setting up

abalanced

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a balanced

balanced

diet and doing exercises at home. By way of explanation,

choosing

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this

way because it is less time-consuming.

Also

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it is easy to observe that it is much more simple because the

gym

requires our strong endurance and weight-lifting skills.

For example

, recently, people have been choosing not to go to the

gym

because of the fear of heavy weights and the difficulty.

Secondly

,

while

some people prefer choosing other ways to get fit, others starting to go to the

gym

to get in shape.

This

is because it is faster to lose belly fat and gain more strength.

Furthermore

, it can be seen that it is easier to make more

friends

.

For instance

, many men after ending a horrible relationship with their girlfriend,

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choose to hit the

gym

in order to get more

friends

which helps them to regain their past spirit and

moreover

to feel happy. Taking everything into consideration,

this

writer

agrees

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the former option because it is much more fun to get fit by going to the

gym

because it is easier to make more

friends

.

Moreover

, it helps us to get back our past spirit after having bad days with work and relationships, passion and importantly our happiness and optimism.