Many feel that going to the gym is the best way to stay fit. Others think there are more effective methods. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

It is thought by individuals that the best way to stay fit is by hitting the

gym

Use synonyms

because it helps us to become healthier and to get in shape

while

Linking Words

others think that there are better ways to do it

due to

Linking Words

the time reduction and it is low difficulty. I have been considering and agree with the former option because it is easy to have more

friends

Use synonyms

at the

gym

Use synonyms

club. First of all,

although

Linking Words

, there are various choices to get fit

such

Linking Words

as setting up

abalanced

Correct your spelling

a balanced

balanced

diet and doing exercises at home. By way of explanation,

choosing

Wrong verb form

I chose

show examples

this

Linking Words

way because it is less time-consuming.

Linking Words

Also

Add a comma

,Also

show examples

it is easy to observe that it is much more simple because the

gym

Use synonyms

requires our strong endurance and weight-lifting skills.

For example

Linking Words

, recently, people have been choosing not to go to the

gym

Use synonyms

because of the fear of heavy weights and the difficulty.

Secondly

Linking Words

,

while

Linking Words

some people prefer choosing other ways to get fit, others starting to go to the

gym

Use synonyms

to get in shape.

This

Linking Words

is because it is faster to lose belly fat and gain more strength.

Furthermore

Linking Words

, it can be seen that it is easier to make more

friends

Use synonyms

.

For instance

Linking Words

, many men after ending a horrible relationship with their girlfriend,

they

Correct pronoun usage

apply

show examples

choose to hit the

gym

Use synonyms

in order to get more

friends

Use synonyms

which helps them to regain their past spirit and

moreover

Linking Words

to feel happy. Taking everything into consideration,

this

Linking Words

writer

agrees

Add the preposition

onagrees

toagrees

withagrees

show examples

the former option because it is much more fun to get fit by going to the

gym

Use synonyms

because it is easier to make more

friends

Use synonyms

.

Moreover

Linking Words

, it helps us to get back our past spirit after having bad days with work and relationships, passion and importantly our happiness and optimism.