Some people think that they can be fit by going to gym, while others think there are other better way to remain fit. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In
the
social life now, Change the word
our
stay
fit and healthy is a necessary thing we should do. Wrong verb form
staying
Someone
believe that Correct your spelling
Some
do
Unnecessary verb
apply
gymnastic
is the best choice Fix the agreement mistake
gymnastics
of improve
fitness, some Change preposition
for improving
another
individuals think there are a lot of Replace the adjective
other
effectual
schemes. Replace the word
effective
This
is exactly to some extent. Physical activity is involve
for every Change the verb form
is involved
each
group, be it the kids or adults. The gym provides Correct determiner usage
apply
way
to exercise or walk and run using prevailing machines. Add an article
a way
Although
, this
is advantageous, but
still, others more Remove the conjunction
apply
actives
are needed to stay fit and healthy.
Taking part in gymnasiums can help a Replace the word
activities
pers on
take care of their body Correct your spelling
person
is
Correct your spelling
in
more
professional manner. The most obvious advantage of doing Add an article
a more
gymnastic
is that these places often employ certified health trainers in order to assist their clients. The gym-goers can seek advice Fix the agreement mistake
gymnastics
of
these experts regarding the diet they should follow, the muscles they should focus on, and how much exercise is appropriate for them. They Change preposition
from
cam
even get a personalised fitness plan and diet regimen which best fits their body type and abilities. Correct your spelling
can
Along with
this
, gyms provide a wide of
range of Change preposition
apply
equipments
and machines each of which could be used to build up a specific set of muscles. Change the wording
equipment
types of equipment
pieces of equipment
For example
, the dumbbells can be used to train the biceps, while
the treadmill can boost a person’s stamina.
Despite the above-mentioned advantages, it is far more encourage
to join an organised action. Wrong verb form
encouraged
Sign
up for a gym membership is an extremely changeable commitment. Most people go for a few months and give up never to turn again. Contrast that with participation in sports and other activities. Someone who picks up tennis or football is much more likely to play regularly for a large portion of their life, possibly deep into old age. Even activities like yoga and Wrong verb form
Signing
aerobic
are more likely to become long lifelong habits and Replace the word
aerobics
therefore
have a greater overall
impact on fitness levels.
In conclusion, gyms are for sure a good method to stay strong, but the results obtained by exercising there often trainsient
sports, Correct your spelling
transient
however
, bring transformations that stay for longer, which is why I think they are far better.Submitted by [email protected] on
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