The graph below provides information on the nuber of students from the US, UK and Australia who studied in other countries between 2002 and 2007.
The given line graph illustrates the information about the
number
of students
from three different countries (The US, the UK
and Australia) who studied in foreign countries from 2002 to 2007.
Overall
, while
the number
of students
from the US and Australia remained stable over the period of time, there was a decline in the number
of students
from the UK
. Furthermore
, the highest number
of students
can be seen from the US.
To begin
with, in 2002, 10000 Australian students
studied overseas, while
the number
of students
from the US and UK
was 50000 and 30000 respectively. However
, the number
of Australian students
shows a period of stability over the entire span except in 2004. Because in 2004, it was a slight decrease. Moreover
, the same pattern can be seen in the US students
. But, in 2004, it reveals a considerable fall compared with Australian students
.
When it comes to the UK
students
, at the beginning it depicts 30,000 students
who studied in foreign countries. After 2003, there is a gradual decrease of approximately 20000 students
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