It is important for all towns and cities to have large outdoor public spaces such as squared and parks. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Some people argue that it is
curical
for all countries to have public access like gardens, especially in their Correct your spelling
crucial
critical
town
and cities Fix the agreement mistake
towns
Iam totalley
agree with Correct your spelling
I totally
notion
. The reason for it is it gives opportunities for our Add an article
the notion
citizen
to get to know each other Fix the agreement mistake
citizens
especially
our children. Add the comma(s)
,especially
In addition
, Linking Words
this
access has increased public Linking Words
happieneces
and satisfaction.
To illustrate, outdoor Correct your spelling
happiness
places
are those Use synonyms
places
where every citizen can Use synonyms
entre
Correct your spelling
enter
it
without fees so the opportunity to have friends on it has increased. When Correct pronoun usage
apply
government
makes gardens,Add an article
the government
a government
Correct word choice
and parcks
parcks
even though, squared, our daughters and sons will get in touch with each other. Correct your spelling
parks
packs
This
connection will increase their abilities to be public speakers and Linking Words
also
their abilities to be Linking Words
mangers
. To explain, in the Netherlands, there Correct your spelling
managers
are
a place where children can go to it and play with each other with no money to pay. Change the verb form
is
Therefore
, her children Linking Words
Add a missing verb
are consideried
consideried
one of the most active workers when they Correct your spelling
considered
have become
Wrong verb form
became
at
their 20th they have become Change preposition
apply
mangers
in many fields as Correct your spelling
managers
Correct article usage
the manger
manger
of Kfc in Geldrop he Correct your spelling
manager
get
his Wrong verb form
got
posstion
when he was 18 years old.
Correct your spelling
position
As well as
, public nature Linking Words
places
Use synonyms
such
as gardens can make citizens more happy more active and more Linking Words
postive
thinkers. Research papers proved that walking in nature can change people's mood from a black and Correct your spelling
positive
a
depressed mood to a light and Correct article usage
apply
a
Correct article usage
apply
shiney
mood. Correct your spelling
shiny
This
Linking Words
also
Linking Words
happend
Correct your spelling
happened
happens
in
citizens in the Netherlands, people there live until they have Change preposition
to
become at
their 80th with a lot of satisfaction about Verb problem
reached
them
life and they Change the pronoun
their
Linking Words
also
considered one of the happiest nations. They rank 9in the happiest countries.
In conclusion, my point of view is public Add a missing verb
are also
places
Use synonyms
is
useful for Change the verb form
are
citizens
satisfaction ,Change noun form
citizens'
citizen's
happiense
and interaction as human beings are social animals and they need it to keep in touch with each other.Correct your spelling
happiness
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