It is important for all towns and cities to have large outdoor public spaces such as squared and parks. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people argue that it is

curical

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crucial

critical

for all countries to have public access like gardens, especially in their

town

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and cities

Iam totalley

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I totally

agree with

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. The reason for it is it gives opportunities for our

citizen

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citizens

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to get to know each other

especially

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,especially

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our children.

In addition

,

this

access has increased public

happieneces

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happiness

and satisfaction. To illustrate, outdoor

places

are those

places

where every citizen can

entre

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it

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apply

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without fees so the opportunity to have friends on it has increased. When

government

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the government

a government

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makes gardens,

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and parcks

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parcks

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parks

packs

even though, squared, our daughters and sons will get in touch with each other.

This

connection will increase their abilities to be public speakers and

also

their abilities to be

mangers

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. To explain, in the Netherlands, there

are

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a place where children can go to it and play with each other with no money to pay.

Therefore

, her children

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are consideried

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consideried

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considered

one of the most active workers when they

have become

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at

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their 20th they have become

mangers

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managers

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in many fields as

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the manger

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manger

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manager

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of Kfc in Geldrop he

get

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his

posstion

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position

when he was 18 years old.

As well as

, public nature

places

such

as gardens can make citizens more happy more active and more

postive

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positive

thinkers. Research papers proved that walking in nature can change people's mood from a black and

a

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depressed mood to a light and

a

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shiney

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shiny

mood.

This

also

happend

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happened

happens

in

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citizens in the Netherlands, people there live until they have

become at

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their 80th with a lot of satisfaction about

them

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life and they

also

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are also

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considered one of the happiest nations. They rank 9in the happiest countries. In conclusion, my point of view is public

places

is

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are

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useful for

citizens

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citizens'

citizen's

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satisfaction ,

happiense

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happiness

and interaction as human beings are social animals and they need it to keep in touch with each other.