The position of women in society has changed markedly in the last twenty years. Many of the problems young people now experience, such as juvenile delinquency, arise from the fact that many married women now work and are not at home to care for their children. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.

Nowadays some group of people argue that many crime that occur in the young part of society is because of the changing married

women

's role in the family. I completely agree with

this

and I believe that the working of married

women

is the main reason for the growing number of young people issues.

Firstly

and mostly, one of the reasons why I agree with

this

is the

time

that married

women

who

work

outside of the home devote themselves to caring for their

children

.

Due to

the high amount of

work

time

obviously, they do not have enough

time

to spend with their family members ,especially

children

. Even if they want to engage with their

children

's problems, because of the restrictions of

work

, sadly they will not have enough

time

. So

children

will suffer from the lack of mother's attention and be brought up in a bad way and show abnormal behaviour.

For example

, in the absence of their mother, they consider someone else like their friends as a role model and imitate their

work

.

Secondly

, most of the

time

housewife mothers treat their

children

very calmly which causes them to live in a peaceful environment.

As a result

, they have secure and better mental health and they will stay away from dangerous behaviour. In conclusion, I completely support

this

argument that the increase in violence and inexcusable behaviour of young persons is because of the absence of mothers and married

women

in homes.