You recently applied for two separate jobs. Both have chosen to hire you, but you must write a letter to one of them explaining why you are unable to take the position. Include in your letter: – An apology – An explanation of your situation

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Dear Mr. Robinson, My name is Erikson Nguyen. I am writing

this

letter to regrettably inform you that I have taken the position of Technical Support Engineer at Fortinet and will have my first day at work 2 weeks from now. I am well aware of the opportunity that your position offers in terms of deepening my IT knowledge and putting them

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practice. The

last

2 interviews with you were

such

a positive experience where I

also

learned more about your wonderful workplace environment to

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a career there. With that being said,

however

, when Fortinet decided to reach out to me with their offer on the table, it was a very difficult decision for me. In the end, I decided not to proceed with your job offer

due to

the location constraint and

also

the fact that a career path in the networking industry has always been my preference. Once again, I would

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like to apologize for not being able to

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your offer as an IT Technician at Alma Inc. Should the opportunity come around in the future, I would like to keep in touch with you and apply

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the position again for your consideration. I wish you and the wonderful family at Alma all the best in the hiring process and beyond! Sincerely, Erikson Nguyen

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

221 words

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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