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inventors are not as important to society as doctors. to what extent do you agree with this statement?

#inventors #society #doctors
Many people believe that the role of doctors
for
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 our society is more vital than the role of inventors. I totally disagree with
this
 statement because I awake to the importance of both jobs. Inventors have influenced society from the past to the present. In the past, they had many inventions which changed our life and
signaled
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 a huge step in mankind,
such
 as electricity.
Additionally
, the internet and smart devices (
smart phones
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, computers and tablets) are created. They can help to connect easily and open our knowledge around the world.
On the other hand
, doctors
also
 have an enormous impact. They have an important responsibility for our lives, with not only physical health but
also
 mental health. Many people are still alive because of the efforts of doctors.
For instance
, cardiac surgeons usually work for hours to perform operations
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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