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In many countries, people choose to live an unhealthy life and this causes health problems. Why do people live an unhealthy life? What can be done about it?

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Nowadays,
people
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 opt to live an unhealthy life, and
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, they are suffering from
health
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 issues. In
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 essay, I will explain why they are choosing to live
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 way, and I will discuss the possible solutions to solve
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 problem. First of all, the reason why
people
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 in some countries consider living an unhealthy life is because they have little income from their
wages
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 which is not enough to feed themselves and their
families
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.
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 of that habit, they have
health
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problems
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such
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 as obesity, heart
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 or even stress and depression, for they have little time for exercise or relieve their stress.
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,
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 the latest news reported by BBC News, Thai
people
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 only receive USD 15 for 8 hours of work each day, so both parents have to work days and nights to fulfil their
families
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' needs. If they have an effective income, their
health
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 issue including physical and mental will be better. In order to solve
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 problem, governments should take action as soon as possible to help increase worker's
wages
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 to fit with their countries' living standards. By doing
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 workers will have less to worry about, and they can afford to buy balanced diets and adequate nutrients for their
families
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. If they work fewer hours, they will have time to improve their
health
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 quality
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 as exercising or having activities with their
families
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 and loved ones. 
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, most nations had
problems
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 with the cost of living because of the economic crisis in 2000. Governments gave hands to help their citizens to survive with subsidies and increased
wages
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 by 20% in the UK. The more the population's income is in balance with living costs the better life and fewer
problems
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 will occur. In conclusion,
people
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 are experiencing more physical and mental
health
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problems
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 right now because of their competitive lifestyle and taking care of their
families
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. In order to combat
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, the governments must help them by raising the
wages
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 to fit with the standard of healthy living.
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