The bar chart below shows the numbers of men and women attending various evening courses at an adult education centre in the year 2009. The pie chart gives information about the ages of these course participants. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows the numbers of men and women attending various evening courses at an adult education centre in the year 2009. The pie chart gives information about the ages of these course participants.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar and pie chart explains the data from the 2009 period. The bar chart depicts the data of
men
and
women
at an adult education
center
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who participated in several evening courses (Drama, Painting,
Sculpture
, and Language),
while
the pie chart elucidates information on the
course
participant’s ages.
Overall
,
women
mostly participated in the Language class,
otherwise
men
in the Painting.
Sculpture
was the
course
with the lowest number of
participants
. In terms of age, most
participants
were from 50 or older adults.
According to
the activities, Painting was the
course
with a similar proportion between
men
and
women
at 25 and 35, respectively.
Moreover
, drama was the activity with the total number of 10 male
participants
at
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10, and
sculpture
had the exact same number of
men
in drama class.
Women
mostly participated in the Language class with a total of 40
women
, on the
,
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contrary
Sculpture
was the
course
with a few
women
attending by 5
women
. As for the total population sorted by age, the big contributor came from elders with almost half of the proportions. Followed by 40 – 49 age
participants
at more than a quarter.
In contrast
, young adults contributed only a tiny fraction of the total
participants
at 5%.
Furthermore
, the proportion of adults with 30 – 39 ages and 20 – 29 ages made up 16% at 11%, respectively.
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