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The bar chart below shows the numbers of men and women attending various evening courses at an adult education centre in the year 2009. The pie chart gives information about the ages of these course participants. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows the numbers of men and women attending various evening courses at an adult education centre in the year 2009. The pie chart gives information about the ages of these course participants. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar and pie chart explains the data from the 2009 period. The bar chart depicts the data of
men
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 and
women
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 at an adult education
center
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 who participated in several evening courses (Drama, Painting,
Sculpture
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, and Language),
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 the pie chart elucidates information on the
course
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 participant’s ages.
Overall
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,
women
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 mostly participated in the Language class,
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men
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 in the Painting.
Sculpture
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 was the
course
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 with the lowest number of
participants
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. In terms of age, most
participants
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 were from 50 or older adults.
According to
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 the activities, Painting was the
course
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 with a similar proportion between
men
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 and
women
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 at 25 and 35, respectively.
Moreover
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, drama was the activity with the total number of 10 male
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10, and
sculpture
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 had the exact same number of
men
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 in drama class.
Women
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 mostly participated in the Language class with a total of 40
women
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, on the
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contrary
Sculpture
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 was the
course
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 with a few
women
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 attending by 5
women
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 . As for the total population sorted by age, the big contributor came from elders with almost half of the proportions. Followed by 40 – 49 age
participants
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 at more than a quarter.
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, young adults contributed only a tiny fraction of the total
participants
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 at 5%.
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, the proportion of adults with 30 – 39 ages and 20 – 29 ages made up 16% at 11%, respectively.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words men, women, sculpture, course, participants with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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