The pie charts below illustrate degrees granted in different sectors at the National University in the 1990, 2000, and 2010.

The pie charts below illustrate degrees granted in different sectors at the National University in the 1990, 2000, and 2010.
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degrees granted in various fields at the National University in the years 1990, 2000, and 2010. We can see that
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Computer Science was more in demand all these years, but only during 1990 there have been a similar 30 per
cent
between
this
realm and Business.
Furthermore
, the number of students that could take a grant for Computer Science increased to nearly half in comparison with the Medicine and Law faculties,
whereas
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moderate fluctuations every
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. The tiny minority of granted degrees in 1990 and 2000
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the Law sector,
however
, it occupied a modest fifteen per
cent
with
Business
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trend in 2010. It is
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noticeable
that the features of Business fell.
For example
, in 1990 and 2000, there were 30 per
cent
and
twenty
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20
per
cent
respectively ,
then
there had been a wild drop to
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modest
fifteen
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15
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cent
by 2010.
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  • illustrate
  • degrees
  • granted
  • sectors
  • National University
  • 1990
  • 2000
  • 2010
  • pie charts
  • introduction
  • overview
  • compare
  • significant
  • changes
  • notable
  • shifts
  • trends
  • summarize
  • main
  • depicted
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