Many feel that going to the gym is the best way to stay fit. Other think there are more effective methods. Discuss both view and give your opinion

There is an argument that going to the

gym

is

the

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a

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good choice to keep fit

while

some

other

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others

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believe that there still

have

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are

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many ways to stay fit.

This

essay

argue

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that other

methods

can have

better

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a better

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effect on your

body

and

discuss

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discusses

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both aspects. On the one hand, there are many

of

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apply

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different ways to stay fit. Using more than two

methods

can improve your

healthy

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health

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scheme considerably.

For example

, you choose both skipping and

go

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going

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jogging on your plan to stay fit can make your

body

keep fit

easier

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easily

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and collab with

the

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a

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healthy diet food

its

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apply

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can be a good choice.

Moreover

, not only your

body

is prettier,

your

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but your

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health and your biological clock can be improved by

apply

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applying

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these

methods

.

On the other hand

, going to the

gym

is still

the

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a

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good

way

but not only that

way

can help you to stay fit. Some people can not keep fit just only go to the

gym

, though it

depend

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depends

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on each each person's

stitution

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status

.

For instance

, you have a fat

body

and you decide to go to the

gym

regularly but your diet is still fast food and greasy food

then

after a long time your weight

still

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is still

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there even

you

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when you

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go to the

gym

.

Furthermore

, in case your

body

is easy to gain grease it can make your weight increase. The

writter

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writer

contends that there are so many better

way

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ways

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to keep fit than only

go

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going

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to the

gym

. Exerting different

methods

can bring you more benefits than using only one.

And not

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Not

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only your

body

is improved,

your

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but your

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health and others can be improved too. In conclusion, we should choose different ways to try. There is not only one

way

to apply. We can use sort of

the

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some

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methods

to keep

your

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you

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fit.