Many feel that going to the gym is the best way to stay fit. Other think there are more effective methods. Discuss both view and give your opinion

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There is an argument that going to the
gym
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is
the
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a
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good choice to keep fit
while
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some
other
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others
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believe that there still
have
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are
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many ways to stay fit.
This
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essay
argue
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that other
methods
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can have
better
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effect on your
body
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and
discuss
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both aspects. On the one hand, there are many
of
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apply
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different ways to stay fit. Using more than two
methods
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can improve your
healthy
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scheme considerably.
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, you choose both skipping and
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jogging on your plan to stay fit can make your
body
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keep fit
easier
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and collab with
the
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healthy diet food
its
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apply
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can be a good choice.
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, not only your
body
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is prettier,
your
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but your
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health and your biological clock can be improved by
apply
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these
methods
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.
On the other hand
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, going to the
gym
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is still
the
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a
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good
way
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but not only that
way
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can help you to stay fit. Some people can not keep fit just only go to the
gym
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, though it
depend
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depends
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on each each person's
stitution
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status
.
For instance
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, you have a fat
body
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and you decide to go to the
gym
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regularly but your diet is still fast food and greasy food
then
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after a long time your weight
still
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there even
you
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when you
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go to the
gym
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.
Furthermore
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, in case your
body
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is easy to gain grease it can make your weight increase. The
writter
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writer
contends that there are so many better
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way
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ways
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to keep fit than only
go
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going
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to the
gym
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. Exerting different
methods
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can bring you more benefits than using only one.
And not
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only your
body
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is improved,
your
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but your
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health and others can be improved too. In conclusion, we should choose different ways to try. There is not only one
way
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to apply. We can use sort of
the
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some
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methods
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to keep
your
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you
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fit.
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    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Physical well-being
  • prime option
  • structured exercise routines
  • professional equipment
  • fostering an environment
  • motivation and discipline
  • counter-argument
  • outdoor activities
  • home workouts
  • cost-effectiveness
  • social and emotional satisfaction
  • team sports
  • hybrid approach
  • holistic approach
  • comprehensive benefits
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