Individuals can do nothing to change society. Any new developments can only be brought about by governments and large institutions. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that there is nothing one individual can do to alter

society

. Government and major institutions are the only entities that can bring about any new advances. In my opinion, I totally disagree with

this

point of view because nowadays there is democracy all over the world and anyone can bring new enhancement by their ability.

Initially

, in modern life, everyone has justice.

For example

, in Korea, dwellers can vote to choose their president. In fact, the feudal system has been deleted so the citizens can contribute their ideas to develop their countries freely. The new government allow individuals to create anything that they think will help to solve any problems.

Moreover

, governments and large institutions sometimes bring improvement based on

residence

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opinion

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by conducting research.

As a result

, their deliberation of abundant sources of information

create

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to

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appropriate developments.

Thus

, the argument that people cannot make any advances can be debunked.

Besides

that, many people bring tremendous benefits

for

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society

just by their abilities.

For example

, some personal inventions come from unique

opinion

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make

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our

life

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easier,

improve

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our mental health and physical health. Indeed,

there

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are not made by

goverments

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governments

government

, there are citizens’

contribution

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and create many sakes to the

society

.

Furthermore

, there are many

accomplishment

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to honor their contribution.

Besides

the

goverments

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governments

government

, there are many

improvement

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be

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brought about by

residence

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.

Hence

, any individual can bring new developments to our

society

. In conclusion, in accordance with the democracy in

modern

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world and huge personal contribution, I disagree

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statement profoundly. I believe that anyone can express their ideas and improve our

society

.