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The system used for rubbish/garbage collection in your local area is not working properly. This is causing problems you and your neighbours. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter: • Describe how the rubbish collection system is not working properly • Explain how this is affecting you and your neighbours • Suggest what should be done about the problem

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am a resident of Amir Temur Street and I am writing to you to complain about the issues
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 collection system in our neighbourhood. Our local area is full of breathtaking views.
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, these days, we are suffering from the system of collecting rubbish. Previously, they used to collect trash twice a week but now they barely come to gather it once a fortnight. As
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, the amount of garbage is increasing rapidly. Without
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,
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 of diseases,
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 as an allergy, infection and a lack of breathing among the residents, especially youngsters and the elderly. I suggest that you should take more employees on
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 system or we are eager to do community work to clean the environment as volunteers. I look forward to receiving your prompt reply to my letter and a solution to
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 issue as soon as possible. Yours sincerely, Asomiddin Saydusmonov
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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • rubbish collection schedule
  • overflow
  • accumulation
  • attracts pests
  • health hazards
  • unsightly appearance
  • foul odors
  • quality of life
  • reliable
  • frequent
  • community awareness programs
  • waste reduction
  • recycling
  • community composting solutions
  • organic waste
  • installation
  • public bins
  • strategic locations
  • littering
  • residential bins
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