Many children these days have an unhealthy lifestyle. Both schools and parents are responsible for solving this problem. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

Currently, the youngster’s daily routine is unhealthy which is damaging to both their physical and mental health, their parents and educational facilities must take responsibility for that.

Lest

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start with

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exploring the reasons behind

this

and

then

criticizing our findings.

To begin

with, life is changing too fast and habits

also

, the way youth spend their free time.

For example

, the older generation enjoyed being outside with their peers,

playing

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and playing

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games on the streets.

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as hide-and-seek and dodgeball,

this

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type of game requires physical effort.

Nevertheless

, today’s

children

prefer to stay at home, spending time in front of a computer screen or chatting with friends with smartphones.

As a result

, they get sick and

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hormonal disruptions. In my point of view,

this

a consequence of

unattended

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attitude of parents who must

have

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pay

their

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attention to

children

outside the home and

found

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find

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new alternative outdoor activities.

Furthermore

, schools are desperate

about

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for

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physical education, which

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devoting

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little time has a huge negative impact on their upbringings.

Moreover

,

school

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schools

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and

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teacher

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teachers

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must

be

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take

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more initiative to teach good habits to a child.

For instance

, private schools have the ability

provide

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to provide

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many social activities for their student from sports to

theater

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theatre

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.

In addition

, only educational institutes are capable of creating a competitive environment for

children

to understand how good to be a part of social and physical activities. In conclusion, both schools and parents are responsible for

this

issue.

Also

, governments

needs

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to act

about

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this

situation, to make

children

understand how important to stay healthy.