The diagrams below show the development of the horse. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the horse evolved of
horse
over the past 40 Add an article
the horse
a horse
million
years, there are 3 types of Add an article
the ancestor
an ancestor
ancestor
of modern horses shape , especially Fix the agreement mistake
ancestors
legs
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the legs
Overall
, there are all four species share the common trait of being quadrupledal
, equine species have increased in size, evolved to have more fur and gone from having toes to a single hold on each
The Eohippus, the first Correct your spelling
quadrupedal
quadrupled
types
of horse that Fix the agreement mistake
type
live
40 Wrong verb form
lived
million
years ago, had four short legs, a relatively small body and Correct article usage
a bare
bare
describe tail . It was two Change the adjective
barely
descedanted
. The Mesohippus and Mercrypus existed between 30 Correct your spelling
descendants
million
and 15 million
years ago , began
to Correct word choice
and began
had
long tails and Change the verb
have
dementary
Correct your spelling
rudimentary
elementary
dentary
shape
of their mane Fix the agreement mistake
shapes
while
their body increased slightly in height, their stature remained largely. The
Correct article usage
Modern
modern
horses process the most pronoun tail mane, Capitalize word
Modern
it
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It
also
the largest animal with a height and body length three times that of Add a missing verb
is also
it
oldest ancestor and the shape is different for the type of ancestorCorrect pronoun usage
its
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