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The line graph compares how much time it would take for three companies to manufacture a refrigerator in 1990 and 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph compares how much time it would take for three companies to manufacture a refrigerator in 1990 and 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates that the three different corporations A,
B
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 and
C
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 take much
time
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 they need to produce one freezer during
this
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 decade.
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, as we can see from the graph compared to the other two
company
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,
company
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C
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 need more
time
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 to produce a
refrigerator
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, and the manufacturing of one
refrigerator
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time
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 taken by
company
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B
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 remained stable during
this
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 period. In 1990,
Company
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C
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 occupied the lower production rate ,which required 35
hours
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 to manufacture a
refrigerator
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. The figures for companies A and
B
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 were needed to produce 30
hours
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 and approximately 27
hours
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 respectively. The
time
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 went to 2000, the manufacture
time
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 of a cooler for
company
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C
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 had decreased to about 29, still the slower production
company
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. It took around 31
hours
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 a cooler in
company
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 A, they experienced a noticeable decline and became faster than other corporations, at 23
hours
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 in 2000. At the same
time
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, it is worth noting that the
refrigerator
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 production of
company
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B
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 is only a little bit closed decreasing to 25
hours
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words b, c, time, company, refrigerator, hours with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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