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The line graph compares how much time it would take for three companies to manufacture a refrigerator in 1990 and 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The line graph illustrates that the three different corporations A,
B
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 and
C
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 take much
time
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 they need to produce one freezer during
this
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 decade.
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, as we can see from the graph compared to the other two
company
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,
company
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C
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 need more
time
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 to produce a
refrigerator
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, and the manufacturing of one
refrigerator
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time
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 taken by
company
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B
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 remained stable during
this
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 period. In 1990,
Company
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C
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 occupied the lower production rate ,which required 35
hours
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 to manufacture a
refrigerator
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. The figures for companies A and
B
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 were needed to produce 30
hours
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 and approximately 27
hours
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 respectively. The
time
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 went to 2000, the manufacture
time
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 of a cooler for
company
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C
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 had decreased to about 29, still the slower production
company
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. It took around 31
hours
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 a cooler in
company
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 A, they experienced a noticeable decline and became faster than other corporations, at 23
hours
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 in 2000. At the same
time
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, it is worth noting that the
refrigerator
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 production of
company
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B
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 is only a little bit closed decreasing to 25
hours
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words b, c, time, company, refrigerator, hours with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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