In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Statistics show that the world's population is increasing rapidly. It is expected that most of us will be living in
cities
within the next few decades. The question of whether urbanisation is a positive or negative development remains controversial. A rapid influx of people moving from rural to urban areas is bound to cause
problems
.
Firstly
, pressure on resources
such
as housing and transportation intensifies. It is becoming difficult for many people to afford adequate housing in
cities
. A by-product of
this
is the creation of slums causing low-income families to group together in neglected parts of the city. These people often become trapped in a cycle of poverty
that is
difficult to escape. As mentioned above, the growth of urban areas can
also
lead to severe traffic congestion because more and more vehicles travel into the city from the suburbs.
This
has many knock-on effects,
such
as
problems
with air quality. It
also
leads many city dwellers to experience mental health issues because travelling across large
cities
is tiring and stressful. All of
this
being said, I don't believe that urbanisation is a wholly negative development. There are advantages to living in large
cities
that are
well managed
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.
For example
, there are more schools which means more education opportunities. Access to higher-quality health care is often better in
cities
. Some
cities
have
also
introduced ride-sharing, e-bikes and
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and ride services that reduce environmental
problems
. My opinion is that many of the
problems
associated with urbanisation are avoidable but dealing with increasing populations in
cities
is a formidable challenge. How governments, businesses and society respond to
this
challenge will dramatically affect the future of our world.
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Example:

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  • Finally
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • rural-to-urban migration
  • population shift
  • positive impact
  • negative impact
  • urbanization
  • job opportunities
  • access to education
  • access to healthcare
  • urban infrastructure
  • rural traditions
  • cultural heritage
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