You recently moved to a new area. Write to your friend and say - Why did you move there - Describe the new place - Invite him/her to visit you

#area #friend #move #place #visit

Hey Naoa! I hope

this

letter finds you in good health and high spirits. I've got some great news for you. I have recently moved to

Toronto

due to

my job displacement. Do you know what happened?

Last

month, I got selected in one of the top IT companies named Samsung and it's an office job located in

Toronto

Downtown. Because it was my passion to work in an IT company since childhood, I moved here. Well!

Toronto

Downtown is a big city with enormous skyscrapers and a lot of career and personal development opportunities. The world's famous and Canada's tallest tower known as CN Tower is located in

Toronto

Moreover

, it is surrounded by Lake Ontario with lots of beaches and has exceptional natural beauty that captivates tourists across the globe. I would like to invite you to visit me

this

Christmas holidays. If you come here, we will not only get a chance to meet after ages but

also

explore

Toronto

's beauty together. I'm waiting for your confirmation whether you can make

this

trip planning successful. I'm eagerly excited to enjoy

this

excursion with you. Can't wait to see you! Warm Regards, Samy

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Task Response

Try to fully develop your arguments and ideas within each paragraph, giving detailed accounts of both reasons for the move and the description of the new area.

Task Response

Maintain a consistent and appropriate tone throughout your letter to achieve a better task response score. Your level of formality is suitable, but be cautious with overly informal expressions in a semi-formal letter.

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

9 paragraphs

195 words

8.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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