You recently moved to a new area. Write to your friend and say - Why did you move there - Describe the new place - Invite him/her to visit you
Hey Naoa!
I hope
this
letter finds you in good health and high spirits. I've got some great news for you. I have recently moved to Toronto
due to
my job displacement.
Do you know what happened? Last
month, I got selected in one of the top IT companies named Samsung and it's an office job located in Toronto
Downtown. Because it was my passion to work in an IT company since childhood, I moved here.
Well! Toronto
Downtown is a big city with enormous skyscrapers and a lot of career and personal development opportunities. The world's famous and Canada's tallest tower known as CN Tower is located in Toronto
. Moreover
, it is surrounded by Lake Ontario with lots of beaches and has exceptional natural beauty that captivates tourists across the globe.
I would like to invite you to visit me this
Christmas holidays. If you come here, we will not only get a chance to meet after ages but also
explore Toronto
's beauty together.
I'm waiting for your confirmation whether you can make this
trip planning successful. I'm eagerly excited to enjoy this
excursion with you.
Can't wait to see you!
Warm Regards,
SamySubmitted by sdeepkaur9 on
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Task Response
Try to fully develop your arguments and ideas within each paragraph, giving detailed accounts of both reasons for the move and the description of the new area.
Task Response
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