The chart below shows the water levels of 6 cities in Australia in October 2009 and 2010.

The chart below shows the water levels of 6 cities in Australia in October 2009 and 2010.
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The bar graph provides information about the level of
water
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in six different cities of Australia in the years 2009 and 2010, more accurate in the month of October.
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, there are 6 cities in Australia which have certain
water
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levels in reservoirs. The downtown with a higher
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of
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reservoirs
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Sydney (2) and
Canberra
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(6) respectively.
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, Darwing (1), Melbourne (3), Brisbane (4), and Perth (5) had a lower
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of quantity of
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in October of both years 2009 and 2010 respectively. Sydney (2) and
Canberra
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(6) in October of 2009 have the same
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which is 75%; in the same month in 2010, Sydney (2) with 81% and
Canberra
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(6) with 99% of
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level source. Evidently,
Canberra
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(6) has more or less 15% more
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than the city of Sidney. Drawing (1), Melbourne (3), Brisbane (4), and Perth (5) in the year 2009 have more than 25%. In 2010 the same cities had more than 29% of the
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level in reservoirs.
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, Brisbane (4) in both years 2009 and 2010 had the same
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of 55%.
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