You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery scholl. In your letter, Describe what you enjoyed about the course Say how muchcooking you've done since the source suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer

Dear Sir/Madam, Hope that you are doing well by the grace of almighty. You know I’ve completed a short
course
in cookery under your faculty. The reason I am writing to you today is to share my experience and provide some feedback on how
this
course
become more beneficial to your future students.
To begin
with, the learning experience in class was beyond my expectations. All the teachers were so caring and showed their optimal professionalism to their pupils.
However
, the gigantic coursework was clumsy and dull compared to the allotted time made it difficult to capture the objectives of the
course
. The practical demonstration was really satisfying and maintained world class level but ,
still
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I would request you to reduce the coursework a bit
thus
the students can grab the entire
course
without putting any extra pressure on their brains.
Lastly
, I would recommend increasing marks to 35% from 25% for the practical exam since cooking is all about practice and presentation.
Overall
, my journey was smooth and I’m completely satisfied with the
course
. Best regards, MO
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