In some countries, people waste a lot of food which is bought in shops and restaurants. What do you think are the reasons? What can be done to solve this problem.

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It is common that a large amount of
food
, which is bought in shops and restaurants,
are
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wasted by people in some countries. I will explain in
this
essay why I believe
this
is the case and suggest measures to solve it. In my view,
this
trend is prevalent for two main reasons. An obvious reason responsible for
this
issue is shops and restaurants may well increase
food
proportions to attract more consumers,
although
the
food
can be much larger than what people
can
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need. Given
this
, a lot of
food
may be wasted. Another possible cause contributing to
this
trend is the development of We-Media attracts many
vloggers
, quite a few of whom create
video
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about begine eating to attract more subscribers and make money for promoting products from manufacturers. Their fans may well follow blindly,
hence
it can lead to plenty of
foods
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food
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are
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wasted. Fortunately, there are several ways to solve
this
problem.
Firstly
, the government should set up standards to regulate
food
proportions to stop irrational competition
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among businesses.
In addition
, the We-Media company should
to
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supervise their
vloggers
. Once they find the
vloggers
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waste
foods
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to gain
the
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video traffic, they can carry out some punishment methods,
such
as fining them and closing the
vloggers
' accounts.
Last
but not least, the public should change their consumption habits from wasting
foods
to saving
foods
, like rational ordering and taking the leftovers home.
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restaurants and shops should cooperate with the government to implement some measures,
such
as promoting
food
conservation
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and
promoting
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clients to order rationally. In short,the vicious competition between businesses, the bad guidance of
vloggers
and the consumers' irrational ordering are the main
cause
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of the development,and fortunately,the government and the public should make join effort to deal with
this
problem.
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