Some parents believe that watching TV and playing computer games should be limited and substituted by reading books. Do you agree or disagree ?
It is widely believed that watching
TV
and playing computer
games
should be limited and substituted by reading books
. Personally, I can neither completely agree nor disagree with this
statement for a variety of reasons.
I partly agree that watching TV
and playing computer
games
should be limited and substituted by reading books
. This
is because, the book is source
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children
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help
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On the other hand
, I disagree with the viewpoint that watching TV
and playing computer
games
should be limited and substituted by reading books
. This
means that watching TV
and playing computer
games
also
have some benefits. In fact, watching TV
help children
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In addition
, playing computer
games
help
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helps
children
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and reduce
stresses
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although
some parents believe that watching TV
and playing computer
games
should be limited and substituted by reading books
. I'm convinced that children
should reading
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books
more than watching TV
and playing computer
games
. Because the benefit of the book is huge for future
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