Some parents believe that watching TV and playing computer games should be limited and substituted by reading books. Do you agree or disagree ?

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It is widely believed that watching
TV
and playing
computer
games
should be limited and substituted by reading
books
. Personally, I can neither completely agree nor disagree with
this
statement for a variety of reasons. I partly agree that watching
TV
and playing
computer
games
should be limited and substituted by reading
books
.
This
is because, the book is
source
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documentary extremely essential for
chidren
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children
, when reading
books
they can learn a lot of knowledge from the book
such
as skills
managerment
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management
times, skills
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management
emotion
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and many
lesson
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about economic, social which
so
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helpful for
children
in the future.
Besides
, reading
books
help
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children
have
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imagine diversity and
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creative
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.
For example
, one of the richest billion people
such
as Bill Gates often
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a
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hundered
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hundreds
books
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every
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, the
books
help him relax and
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about
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strategy
for his company.
On the other hand
, I disagree with the viewpoint that watching
TV
and playing
computer
games
should be limited and substituted by reading
books
.
This
means that watching
TV
and playing
computer
games
also
have some benefits. In fact, watching
TV
help
children
update some news and
informations
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caution
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which
help
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helps
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children
can to
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themself.
In addition
, playing
computer
games
help
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helps
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children
connected
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with their friends,
reduce
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and reduce
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stresses
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after learning in school.
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, my friends and I often
playing
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video game together to relax
1
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-2 hours a day,
this
help us have
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a chance
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talk
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anymore
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comfortable
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. In conclusion,
although
some parents believe that watching
TV
and playing
computer
games
should be limited and substituted by reading
books
. I'm convinced that
children
should
reading
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books
more than watching
TV
and playing
computer
games
. Because the benefit of the book is huge for
future
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the future
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of
children
.
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