Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now 'one big traffic jam'. How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars?'
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three decades . The number of cars possessed had a humungous growth,mostly in cities .Linking Words
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leads to blockage of roads.So let us discuss the reasons for Linking Words
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increase in the number of vehicles and a remedy for that.
First of all , people are buying a lot of automobiles and it is because of the reasons, that it is cosier, time-saving and way more comfortable.In order to meet these needs they are forced to buy a car.Linking Words
For example
, travelling on a bus or any other public transport could only result in more time-consuming , insecure and uncomfortable rides.Linking Words
However
, purchasing their own car can be safe and sound.Linking Words
Due to
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fact ,there has been an increase in the number of cars bought over the period.
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Secondly
, to discourage people from purchasing a vehicle.The government need to increase the taxes on the vehicles . Doing so people like youngsters can be stopped from buying it and make them choose an alternate way of travelling.Linking Words
As a result
,the vehicle count and the traffic jams could be reduced.Linking Words
In addition
to that ,we can make public transport more secure,cosy and cost-friendly.Linking Words
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, the public will be encouraged to use these public vehicles .If we improve the quality of the ride Linking Words
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cost efficiency and punctuality.By doing so we can reduce the traffic and the purchase of automobiles.
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To conclude
, the vehicle count gradually increased over the period and kept on increasing.In my opinion , Linking Words
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is because of the safety , comfort and cost-efficiency.Linking Words
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