The chart shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops opening in a country from 2011 to 2018.
The graph illustrates the
number
of shops
that it had closed down and opened from 2011 to 2018.
Overall
, it had a downward trend in the number
of closed and open stores
.
As can be seen in the graph given, it is clear that
in 2011, the proportion of opened shops
was very high about 8,500 shops
. In the next year, there was a significant decrease in 4,000 shops
. Next,
from 2012 to 2014, this
quantity had increased again and this
was an upward trend with 4,000 shops
in 2011 to 6,100 shops
in 2014. After that, it tended to decline again from 6,100 stores
in 2014 to 4,000 stores
in 2015. This
number
was steady in 2016 and then
, it had a mild rise at 4,100 outlets in 2017. Finally
, it continued to decrease in 2018 by about 3,000 shops
.
On the other hand
, the number
of closed shops
also
had a fluctuation. Firstly
, it had a slight drop from 6,300 shops
in 2011 to 6,000 shops
in 2012. Besides
that, from 2012 to 2014, it did not have a stable. It had increased in 2013 to about 7,100 stores
but in the next year, it’s just about 6,500 shops
. In 2015, it had a significant fall from 6,500 shops
to 500 shops
. Then
it had a quick increase immediately about 5,100 outlets in 2016. Between 2016 and 2018, it stayed constant and did not have many changes.Submitted by vuhien4397 on
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