The chart below show the number of magazines sold per person in five countries in 2003 and 2005, with projected sales for 2007. Summarize the information by describing the main features of the charts and making comparisons where appropriate.
This
chart illustrates the number of Linking Words
magazines
which were sold in five different countries between 2003 and 2005. Use synonyms
This
chart Linking Words
also
has the projected Linking Words
sales
of the Use synonyms
magazines
for 2007. In Use synonyms
this
chart, the countries are named with A, Linking Words
B
, Use synonyms
C
, D and Use synonyms
E
.
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To begin
with, the Linking Words
sales
of the Use synonyms
magazines
per person in 2003 was highest in Use synonyms
country
A, Use synonyms
B
and Use synonyms
C
which was around 50 in Use synonyms
country
A and Use synonyms
B
Use synonyms
while
in Linking Words
country
Use synonyms
C
, it is 46. Use synonyms
Whereas
in 2005, the Linking Words
sales
of Use synonyms
magazines
were comparatively low i.Use synonyms
e
. in Use synonyms
country
A, it was 43, in Use synonyms
country
Use synonyms
B
, it was 47 and in Use synonyms
country
Use synonyms
C
, the Use synonyms
sales
were 36 which is slightly lower than in 2003. Within these 3 countries, the projected Use synonyms
sales
for 2007 were always lower than the previous Use synonyms
sales
record i.Use synonyms
e
. Use synonyms
sales
of 2005 because the slope of the Use synonyms
sales
was coming downwards from 2003 to 2005.
Use synonyms
Furthermore
, in Linking Words
country
D, the number of people who purchased Use synonyms
magazines
Use synonyms
were
lesser in 2003 i.Correct subject-verb agreement
was
e
. 18 but the Use synonyms
sales
went upward in 2005 i.Use synonyms
e
. 20. Use synonyms
Therefore
, the projected Linking Words
sales
for 2007 were higher comparatively.
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In addition
, Linking Words
country
Use synonyms
E
has very few Use synonyms
sales
Use synonyms
therefore
there is no specific pattern of slope. In 2003, the Linking Words
sales
were 3. In 2005, it was a little bit higher and Use synonyms
then
the projected Linking Words
sales
were equal to the Use synonyms
sales
of 2003.Use synonyms
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "therefore".
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 75%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words magazines, sales, b, c, e, country with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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