The chart below show the number of magazines sold per person in five countries in 2003 and 2005, with projected sales for 2007. Summarize the information by describing the main features of the charts and making comparisons where appropriate.
This
chart illustrates the number of magazines
which were sold in five different countries between 2003 and 2005. This
chart also
has the projected sales
of the magazines
for 2007. In this
chart, the countries are named with A, B
, C
, D and E
.
To begin
with, the sales
of the magazines
per person in 2003 was highest in country
A, B
and C
which was around 50 in country
A and B
while
in country
C
, it is 46. Whereas
in 2005, the sales
of magazines
were comparatively low i.e
. in country
A, it was 43, in country
B
, it was 47 and in country
C
, the sales
were 36 which is slightly lower than in 2003. Within these 3 countries, the projected sales
for 2007 were always lower than the previous sales
record i.e
. sales
of 2005 because the slope of the sales
was coming downwards from 2003 to 2005.
Furthermore
, in country
D, the number of people who purchased magazines
were
lesser in 2003 i.Correct subject-verb agreement
was
e
. 18 but the sales
went upward in 2005 i.e
. 20. Therefore
, the projected sales
for 2007 were higher comparatively.
In addition
, country
E
has very few sales
therefore
there is no specific pattern of slope. In 2003, the sales
were 3. In 2005, it was a little bit higher and then
the projected sales
were equal to the sales
of 2003.Submitted by khannaughty26 on
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