The chart below show the number of magazines sold per person in five countries in 2003 and 2005, with projected sales for 2007. Summarize the information by describing the main features of the charts and making comparisons where appropriate.

The chart below show the number of magazines sold per person in five countries in 2003 and 2005, with projected sales for 2007. Summarize the information by describing the main features of the charts and making comparisons where appropriate.
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This
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chart illustrates the number of
magazines
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which were sold in five different countries between 2003 and 2005.
This
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chart
also
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has the projected
sales
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of the
magazines
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for 2007. In
this
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chart, the countries are named with A,
B
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,
C
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, D and
E
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.
To begin
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with, the
sales
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of the
magazines
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per person in 2003 was highest in
country
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A,
B
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and
C
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which was around 50 in
country
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A and
B
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while
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in
country
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C
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, it is 46.
Whereas
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in 2005, the
sales
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of
magazines
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were comparatively low i.
e
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. in
country
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A, it was 43, in
country
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B
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, it was 47 and in
country
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C
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, the
sales
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were 36 which is slightly lower than in 2003. Within these 3 countries, the projected
sales
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for 2007 were always lower than the previous
sales
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record i.
e
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.
sales
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of 2005 because the slope of the
sales
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was coming downwards from 2003 to 2005.
Furthermore
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, in
country
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D, the number of people who purchased
magazines
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were
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was
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lesser in 2003 i.
e
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. 18 but the
sales
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went upward in 2005 i.
e
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. 20.
Therefore
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, the projected
sales
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for 2007 were higher comparatively.
In addition
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,
country
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E
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has very few
sales
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therefore
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there is no specific pattern of slope. In 2003, the
sales
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were 3. In 2005, it was a little bit higher and
then
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the projected
sales
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were equal to the
sales
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of 2003.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "therefore".
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 75%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words magazines, sales, b, c, e, country with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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