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The chart illustrates the amount of money different professionals earn in the U.K.,
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. Units are measured in pounds.
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job,
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job in the U.K. in both periods (when they started to
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. Looking at the details, as regards the money, nurse receives the lowest salary (18.000 at the start of their career and 19.000 after
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police earn 3.000 more, with 21.000 when they started
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later, with 23.000. In the case of
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and underground
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, their salaries will increase by 1.000 in
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, with 4.100 and 5.100 respectively. Regarding average working
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, underground
driver
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nurse
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work
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almost the same number of
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, which is 15 less than
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • gender diversity
  • innovative
  • comprehensive
  • bridge the gap
  • prevailent
  • STEM
  • meritocracy
  • undermine
  • qualification
  • inadvertently
  • reinforce
  • stereotypes
  • artificial
  • equality
  • access
  • opportunities
  • resources
  • quotas
  • root causes
  • societal norms
  • role models
  • disparities
  • inclusive
  • curriculum
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