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You are attending an evening course at a local college. However, due to changes in your work schedule, you can no longer attend at that time. Write a letter to the course administrator. In your letter: explain the situation request a change to a different class or schedule say why this change would benefit you

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to request a change in my current evening English course schedule. For the past three months, I have been enrolled in the evening batch from 7 pm to 9 pm. Unfortunately, my office has recently extended working hours until 8:30 PM, which prevents me from arriving on time and
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 the sessions regularly.
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, I have missed several lessons and feel that my progress has been negatively affected. I would be grateful if you could transfer me to the weekend morning batch, which I understand runs from 9:00–11:00 AM.
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 timing would be far more suitable, as it would allow me to participate fully in the lessons without interruption.
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, attending consistently will help me prepare more effectively for the IELTS examination, which I plan to take later
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 year. Thank you for your time and consideration. I look forward to your confirmation. Yours faithfully, Akshata

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task response
You cover all parts of the task well. To make the request even stronger, say if you can start the new class at once or from a set day.
coherence and cohesion
Your letter is easy to follow, with a clear start, reason, request, and end. You can link the last two ideas with one more word such as “also” or “therefore” to make the flow even smoother.
task response
You clearly say why you cannot go to the evening class, ask for a weekend class, and explain how it will help you.
coherence and cohesion
Each paragraph has one clear job, and the letter has a polite greeting and closing. The ideas are in a natural order.
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