Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel or to work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays,
people
learn foreign different
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. Some
people
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that foreign
language
only
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for traveling or business.
On the other hand
, some
people
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that learning
foreign
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language
has more advantages.
For instance
, Communicating, studying or
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broadening
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our
horizon
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horizons
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. In
this
topic, we will discuss both
veiws
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views
in order before
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conclusion. It is necessary to
learning
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foreign
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language
for everyone. In fact, if we want to travel to another country and do not know their
language
, we can not contact
with
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them and bring our desire.
Also
, if we were a businessman, we need to know how
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intract
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interact
with them to get more benefits. But, we still need to learn more from their
language
.
For example
, when we
were
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buying or selling some products, we should speak fluently to attract our producer or customer.
Due to
the fact that we should not learn foreign
language
only for work or travel. There are numerous reasons for learning
other
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language
except
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besides
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working or
traveling
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travelling
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.
we
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may learn
other
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another language
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language
for studying. For illustrate, if we were
continue
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our
study
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studies
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in
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at
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foreign
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university, we might learn a second
language
.
Furthermore
, we must be able to speak another
language
for interacting
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to interact
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people
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with people
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where we live in
foreign
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a foreign
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country.
Also
, if we do not want to emigrate, we still need to learn
different
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a different
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language
.
For instance
, we can read many types of novels which are written
by
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in
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another
language
and
this
contribute
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to
broaden
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broadening
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our horizon. In general, after considering all of that, I think we have to learn a second
language
at least. Because we do not live
in
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this
planet alone and we need each other whether we live together
nor
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or
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far away.
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